Jawaban:

28th Febuary 2022

14 Oakland Ave
a city, Florida, 32104
United State of America

My dear Zahran

Hello my sweatheart, How are you there? i'm so sorry for coming home late. mommy still has many job here, but mommy has prepared a souvenir for you.

You know dear~ I missed you so much, i can't even concentrate with my job because i always thought of you

i was sick for two days, maybe it's because i couldn't adapt with the condition here but don't worry, i'm feeling better right now. i will see you soon in next week so wait for me okay? but until then write as soon as you can. Take care and stay safe

P.S. I'll bring you a luxurious shoes

Much love, bunda

Penjelasan:

ada beberapa hal yang salah disini dan saya yakin kakak sudah mengetahui beberapa kesalahannya~

Baik kesalahannya ialah

- letak 'my dear Zahran' di sebelah tanggal, harusnya ini ditulis setelah
 alamat

- kata 'mommy was still many jobs' kata ini salah dan pengejaanya
 harusnya ialah 'mommy still has many job here' was nya yang salah~

- kata 'prepared the souvenir' memang bisa dibenarkan namun
 kedengaran aneh apabila tak tahu konteks, jadi bisa diganti 'prepared a
 souvenir'

- kata 'i'm missing you' lebih tepatnya kata missing.. yang harusnya
 merindukan malah menjadi kehilangan~ so harusnya menjadi missed
 atau miss

- penyusunan paragraf mommy can't concentrate~ sama paragraf lain

- Hello sweet heart harusnya ada di pembukaan surat

- kata 'two days ago i was sick' memang bisa dibaca namun kurang pas
 jadi kakak bisa ganti dengan 'i was sick two days ago'

- kata 'adaptation' niatnya mau mengatakan beradaptasi tapi kata kata
 nya kurang pas, cukup ganti dengan 'Adapt'

- penataan next week dengan i will see you soon

- kata p.s i'll bring you luxury Shoes harusnya di akhir

- Write as soon as you can harusnya sebelum take care and stay safe