Question: Fixing sentence and grammar

Answer:

1. Rani takes part in a writing competition last week, the winner is announced today and Rani became the first winner

Translation: Rani mengikuti kompetisi menulis minggu lalu, Pemenangnya diumumkan hari ini dan Rani menjadi juara pertama

2. Lidiya is planning for her birthday party and she invite all of her classmates to her party

Translation: Lidiya sedang mempersiapkan pesta ulang tahunnya dan dia mengundang semua teman kelasnya untuk datang ke pestanya

3. Bima is going to compete in a singing contest, he has practiced a song for the judge

Explanation:

1. Explaining about Rani and her current situation with the writing competition she joined last week.

Fixed Word:

Amounted (Berjumlah) >> Announced (Diumumkan)

2. Explaining about Lidiya and her activity (her birthday party) and what she's going to do with it

Fixed Word:

Invests (Investasikan/Berinvestasi) >> Invite (Mengundang)

Classmeeting (Rapat Kelas) >> Classmates (Teman Sekelas)

3. Explaining about Bima competing in a singing competition and he practiced a song for the judge.

Fixed Word:

"Fans (Penggemar)" >> "Judge (Juri)"