Jawaban:

Ada beberapa kesalahan dalam penggunaan tensedan jugaarticles pada cerita. Perbaikan adalah yang di cetak tebal.

When I was a child, I liked to play gobak sodor. Gobak sodor is a traditional game from central Java. We usually playedthis game after wecame back from school. This game consists of two teams.

We were having fun playing together but when Sahada's team lost, she cried and I said "don't cry Sahada it is just a game, we can win or lose in this game." Sahada didn't stop her cried. Her voice was heardby her mom thatwas comingto us andasked "who's making Sahada cried?" with angry and high voice.

We felt scared, then my friend, Joko tried to explain "We didn't makeSahadacry, Sahada just lost in this game and i don't know why Sahada started to cried."

But Sahada's mom didn't believe that we didn't made Sahada cry. We told Sahada, "Sahada please, we didn't doanythingto you." And then, Sahada stop her cry, and said "They didn't make me cry, i just lost in this game." Sahada's mom saidsorry to us andgave advice to Sahada. Then, we played again together.​

Penjelasan:

Untuk menceritakan tentang kejadian masa lampau, maka gunakan Simple Past Tense

Simple Past Tense = menyatakan sesuatu yang terjadi di masa lampau. Rumus:

(+) S + V2 + O
(-) S + did + not + Vinf + O

(?) Did + S + Vinf + O + ?