Can someone correct my grammar?(cerita tentang masa kecil)

When i was child, i like to play gobak sodor. Gobak sodor is traditional game from central Java. We usually play this game after we go back from school. This game consist of two teams.

We having fun playing together but when Sahada's team lost, she cried and i said "don't cry sahada it just a game, we can win or lose in this game." Sahada didn't stop her cried. Her voice heared by her mom that is coming to us and ask "who's making sahada cried?." With angry and high voices.

We feel scared and my friend Joko try to explained "We are not making Sahada crying, Sahada just lost in this game and i don't know why Sahada started to cried."

But Sahada's mom couldn't believe that we didn't made Sahada crying. We ask to Sahada "Sahada please, we are not doing anything for you."
And then, Sahada stop her crying, and she said "They're not make me cry, i'm just lost in this game." Sahada's mom say sorry to us and give advice to Sahada. Then, we playing again together.

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