Jawaban:

Anxiety about new activities.

AmouD (AmouD)

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The Letter

Dear Jane,

I was delighted to read you're letter last week. Its always a pleasure to recieve

the latest news and to here that you and your family had a great summer.

We spent last week at the beach and had so much fun on the sand and in the

water exploring the coast we weren't prepared for the rains that came at the end

of the vacation. The best parts of the trip was the opportunities to sightsee and

relax.

My kids are back in school to. I find their are less things to worry about now that

the kids are at school all day. There is plenty of fun things to do in the summer,

but by August, I've running out of ideas. I've excepted the fact that we'll have to

think up brand-new activities next summer; hoping to round up some creative

ideas soon.

Thanks again for your letter!

Sincerely,

The Corrected Letter:

Dear Jane,

I was delighted to receive your letter last week. It's always a pleasure to receive the latest news and to hear that you and your family had a great summer. We spent last week at the beach and had so much fun on the sand and in the water exploring the coast. However, we weren't prepared for the rains that came at the end of the vacation. The best parts of the trip were the opportunities to sightsee and relax.

My kids are also back in school now. I find that there are fewer things to worry about now that the kids are at school all day. There are plenty of fun things to do in the summer, but by August, I've run out of ideas. I've accepted the fact that we'll have to think up brand-new activities next summer and I'm hoping to round up some creative ideas soon.

Thanks again for your letter!

Sincerely,

[Your name]