It is important to use proper grammar, punctuation and capitalization in English writing because:

1.It gives an easy understanding for the readers of our writing by using proper grammar and punctuation. Often, error in punctuations will result in misunderstanding of the narrative we are trying to portray to our readers.

2. It gives a good credibility and professionalism of ourselves as a writer. Sloppy grammar and spelling will only discredit our reputation as a writer and will distance away ourselves with our readers.

3. By writing properly, we are respecting our reader’s time and intelligent especially if our writing will be published elsewhere so they do not have to waste time to correct our writing.

Write a descriptive paragraph consisting 4-5 sentences containing:

• an introductory sentence

• location of the office

• interesting features of the office

• what you feel about the office

A great open office to work in.

Nowadays, an open office is very common and desirable for the reason of being more friendly among employees. It gives the sense of team work where everybody can see each other and discuss openly. However, in the old days, many offices are hidden in walled rooms where everybody can lock them selves and as if they do not welcome people in their office. This is very unwelcoming and does not encourage team work and open mindedness.

As seen by the attached picture, the office setup is very relax where there is no wall among employees work stations. Everybody can see each other across the room. There is a stair at the far end of the office room leading to a game room where employees can rest and relax if needed after a long work hours. In the game room you can find a pool table, dart game, video games,  

This office is located in the business district in a suburb area of Denver, Colorado. The office belongs to a small sized social media company which does a lot of online marketing for the Food and Beverage companies.

The middle work stations are located for the creative department where they are seated close to each other so they can discuss and exchange ideas. All their specialized computers are geared for high speed design interface which requires a lot of memory and power so they put them accordingly.

The desks appeared on the foreground of the picture are for the project manager and his admin staff. It is common that the more senior an employee is the more somewhat privacy his or her work station will be located. This is for the reason of being a team leader, he or she needs to do a lot of planning and thinking to prepare a project for his or her staffs. However, in this open space office all of the supervisors and managers are located purposely to be approachable and staff friendly. This way, it encourages team work and it will definitely benefit the company as a whole.

Penjelasan:

Text di atas tergolong sebuah Descriptive Text dimana penulis menjelaskan sebuah kondisi kantor sistem terbuka (open space office) serta detail-detailnya dan bagaimana tanggapan penulis tentang kondisi kantor yang diceritakan. Secara umum, Descriptive Text adalah sebuah jenis text yang menceritakan tentang figur seseorang, sebuah benda, hewan, tumbuhan, suatu tempat/lokasi, kondisi alam, sebuah fenomena, dan lain-lain.

Berikut ciri-ciri Descriptive text:

1. Menggunakan Simple Present Tense karena menjelaskan tentang sesuatu kondisi secara umum.
2. Banyak menggunakan kata sifat (adjective).
3. Banyak menggunakan verb to be (is/are).

Sedangkan struktur Descriptive Text dalam paragraph dapat dibagi menjadi 2 bagian, yaitu:

1. Bagian awal Pengenalan (Identification)Bagian awal Pengenalan (Identification) - Bagian ini pada dasarnya mengidentifikasi tentang apa yang ingin diceritakan dan akan menjadi panduan awal untuk pembaca secara garis besar tentang apa isi cerita yang akan disampaikan penulis.
2. Bagian Penjelasan (Description) - Bagian ini menjelaskan secara detail tentang inti cerita yang disampaikan penulis. Bagian ini merinci semua kejadian-kejadian, kondisi objek yang ingin diceritakan sehingga pembaca dapat mengerti secara penuh inti dari apa yang disampaikan penulis. Bagian ini pada dasarnya mengidentifikasi tentang apa yang ingin diceritakan dan akan menjadi panduan awal untuk pembaca secara garis besar tentang apa isi cerita yang akan disampaikan penulis.

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