Read this student essay. There are ten mistakes in the use of adverb clauses, including incorrect subordinating conjunctions. The first mistake is already corrected. Find and correct nine more. and give reasons.Why Sports? by Jamal Jefferson A lot of people are criticizing school sports these days. Some say there's too much while emphasis on football and basketball, if there's not enough emphasis on education. Others say the idea of the scholar-athlete is a joke. Still others say sports provide a way of encouraging violence. I think they're all wrong. If anything, school sports help prevent violence, not encourage it. Why do I think sports are a positive force? For one thing, sports are positive even though they give students opportunities to be involved in something. Every day on TV we hear that violence is increasing. I think a lot of people get involved in crime when they won't have enough to do to keep themselves busy. After you'll play two or three hours of basketball, baseball, or any other kind of sport, It's hard to commit a violent act even you want to. Second, sports teach people a lot of worthwhile things, especially at the high school level. If they play on a team, students learn to get along and work with others. Wherever their team wins, they learn how to be good winners; when their team will lose, they find out they have to struggle to improve. They discover that winning a few and losing a few are part of the normal ups and downs of life. Also, there's no doubt that students improve their physical condition by participating in sports. Finally, sports are positive although they allow students who do not have enough money to go to college to get sports scholarships and improve their chances for a successful life. Whereas a young basketball player from a small village in Nigeria can get a scholarship to play for say, UCLA, he will have a chance to get an education and probably make his life better. Wherever a young woman with little money is accepted on the University of Toronto swim team and gets a scholarship, she'll have the chance to earn a college degree and go on to a high-paying job. Because school sports programs have some deficiencies that need to be corrected, their benefits outweigh their disadvantages. I should know because I'm one of those students. School sports must stay.

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