Tolong benerin kalo ada penggunaan kata yang salah ataupun penggunaan present tense yang salah. mau buat lombaOnce upon the time, there lived a women with two daughters in small village. The first was her step daughter named bawang, and the younger one named kesuna. They have very opposite traits. Bawang was a diligent and smart girl, she always help her mother. While kesuna is lazy girl and only care about preening and dressing up.
One day, bawang and kesuna were asked to crush the rice by their mother. "My dear daughter, come here, I want go to the market to buy something, so please crush this rice" "Ok mom" Said bawang. "Don't worry mom, I will finish it before you go back from market" Added kesuna. "Kesuna, let's take the rice, it's so heavy" Said bawang "no.. No.. No.. No, you can do it by yourself" Answered kesuna. "Kesuna I have take the rice, now let's crush it together" "Stop asking me to help you, I don't want do do anything. Do you know, it will break my beautiful nails" Answer kesuna were putting on some make up.
In sound, bawang did all works alone. After finishing her duty, bawang went to the river to was the clothes and take the water. For the other occasion, kesuna was very tricky to bawang, kesuna took the handful of rice and poured it into her body, pretending that she crushed the rice alone.
Few minutes later the mother came and found that kesuna was full of dust and full of rice. "Why do you work alone? Where is bawang?" Ask her mother "mom, as you can see, I crush the rice alone, meanwhile bawang went to the river to taking a bath, she doesn't want to help me mom" Answered kesuna. Her mother believed kesuna story. She became so angry.
On the other occasion, bawang scrubbing and washing the clothes, she had not realized that some of her mother and sister clothes has washed away. "Oh my god, where are the clothes, where are my mother expensive clothes and where are my sister beautiful clothes"
She was so panicked, she has been looking around the stone, but nothing. "Help.. Help me.. Help me, somebody please help me" She scream loudly. She cry and look so distraught. Then she looking for them along the river. "Anyone please help me anyone, my clothes are washed away by the river water" Then she met a fish "ohoo my sweety, I'm very sorry, I haven't seen them yet, maybe you can ask my friend, crab" Said fish. And then bawang looking for them again.
"My mother doesn't like me and hate me, she always treated me very badly, even though I woke her and help her everyday". Suddenly she met a crab " Ohh my goodness bawang, I heard you were looking for your clothes but i see nothing, you can keep following the river, I hope you can find them" "Thank you Mr. Crab" Reply bawang.
When bawang was sitting alone, there was an old lady watch her. "Uhukk.. Uhuk.. Uhuk, don't be afraid bawang, I know you will be very tired to find your mother's clothes" Said the old lady. The old lady smile and keep bawang the clothes of her mother and sister. Bawang was so happy and really thankful to old lady. And then old lady ask bawang to take a pumpkin "uhuk.. Uhukk, take a pumpkin" Said the old lady "yes, of course" Reply bawang. "Take it and you can open it at home, now you can go home, your mother and sister has been waiting for you" Said the old lady. "Ohh my grandma, thank you so much, thank you".
Without thinking twice, bawang go home soon. After arriving at home. She open the pumpkin, she was so surprised to see a lot of jewelries "oh my god, there necklace, diamond, gold, and ring, thank you god, thank you"
Then kesuna knew that bawang had a lot of jewelry, kesuna felt jealous "hey bawang, tell me where did you got those jewelry" Ask kesuna. Bawang was so kind and naif told everything to kesuna.
As soon as possible kesuna went to river to meet old lady. And the old lady ask kesuna to take a pumpkin. Kesuna was so happy and hope that she got more jewelry.
After arriving at home, kesuna open the pumpkin, how surprise she was, there was a snake "ahhh... What it is? Why there a snake, ohh.. Where is my jewelry, mom.. Bawang.. Help me, mom... " Cream kesuna, Kesuna sounded in pain from being attacked by a snake.​